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"Griffin, go feed the minions for," Uncle Vladimir ordered.
Vladimir picked up a silver bucket and shoved it toward me. I grabbed the handle and started walking to the barn. I opened the large barn door and walked into darkness.
"Griffin, go feed the minions for," Uncle Vladimir ordered.
Vladimir picked up a silver bucket and shoved it toward me. I grabbed the handle and started walking to the barn. I opened the large barn door and walked into darkness.
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Uncle Vladimir picked up a metal bucket and shoved it toward me. "Griffin! Go feed the minions," he ordered.
I grabbed the rusted handle and walked to the barn. Lanterns on each side of the door hung dark, no fire burned. Shadows danced beneath the moonless night. I shoved the door open. Nothing but blackness. Fear rose inside of me like an angry ghost. Summoning what little courage remained behind my resolve to obey my uncle, I shuffled inside.
I grabbed the rusted handle and walked to the barn. Lanterns on each side of the door hung dark, no fire burned. Shadows danced beneath the moonless night. I shoved the door open. Nothing but blackness. Fear rose inside of me like an angry ghost. Summoning what little courage remained behind my resolve to obey my uncle, I shuffled inside.
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