How to fix this part of my story?

How to fix this part if my story?

I'm having a hard time fixing this. I do better once someone fixes it


"Griffin, go feed the minions for," Uncle Vladimir ordered.

Vladimir picked up a silver bucket and shoved it toward me. I grabbed the handle and started walking to the barn. I opened the large barn door and walked into darkness.

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Uncle Vladimir picked up a metal bucket and shoved it toward me. "Griffin! Go feed the minions," he ordered.

I grabbed the rusted handle and walked to the barn. Lanterns on each side of the door hung dark, no fire burned. Shadows danced beneath the moonless night. I shoved the door open. Nothing but blackness. Fear rose inside of me like an angry ghost. Summoning what little courage remained behind my resolve to obey my uncle, I shuffled inside.

Should I read the Women of the Underworld series by Kelly Arnstrong?

Should i read the women of the underworld series by kelly armstrong?

Why?

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How old are you? It's important when you read to know your limits.

Kelly Armstrong is an excellent writer. She's really good at developing tension and motive in her stories. She gets the reader involved quickly with well-written hooks, followed by thought provoking plots. Her fight scenes can be brutal, yet satisfying. The main character doesn't always come out on top until the end of the story, but that seems more real to me. I love all of her books. She does include sex in her novels. So if that's not a problem, enjoy.